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Water, ever-flowing
Waves break the surface.
Flowing from the horizon, the cool breeze.
Clouds; Psychics who tell of storms,
the tears and howls of the blue surface speaking.
Fish of endless variety
trenches so deep, so wide, and so great;
The crevices that split this planet's floor.
Liquid when warm, solid when North
Boats dotting its face
And typhoons, only but tantrums.

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I'll admit that I don't like this improv so much. I like the next one a lot better. ^^''


Long story short, I had to do some improv poetry a while ago.
There's one more after this. Please look forward to that one NOT based off what you read here; unless you liked what you read here. xD

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~rosefairy0 Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
Honestly... I don't quite get it ^^; This poem is hard to understand for me :P
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